Talk:Gail Kim/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 17:26, 16 November 2010 (UTC)

I'll review this article tonight. Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 17:26, 16 November 2010 (UTC)

Thank you very much! I haven't had a GA review in a while and my free time changes from day to day, so all issues I will try to take care of as soon as possible.--WillC 04:23, 17 November 2010 (UTC)

No problem. Here are the issues:

• "She debuted in December 2000, wearing a mask and wrestling as "The Queen of the Cats" La Felina in the Southern Ontario-based Apocalypse Wrestling Federation and was eventually unmasked by Tracy Brooks in a "Mask versus Hair" match" too much of a run-on; split the sentences.
• "there she successfully retain the title" retained.
• "early-2010" I'm pretty sure that dash isn't needed.
• 'which was won by the later." latter

Just a couple things. Article will be put on hold and passed when the issues are fixed. Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 14:47, 17 November 2010 (UTC)

All fixed hopefully. Thanks for the review!--WillC 18:29, 18 November 2010 (UTC)

Looks good, so the article passes. Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 01:03, 19 November 2010 (UTC)