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Requesting a few amendments to the page's structure - for novice readers.
Firstly, thank you to everyone who has contributed to create this page I feel as though I now have some understanding of a topic that was brand new to me.
As a novice I found the addition of correctness, which is interwoven extensively throughout the page, distracting rather than helpful. Is it actually pertinent to the definition and subsequent explanation?
The opening definitional statement makes point that attribution error is the tendency to seek an internal reference when trying to explain a event; and in doing so, often ignoring a multitude of external factors that would also explain the event. However the example also then goes on and refers to the act of internal referencing as an error. I found this distracting as is it not self evident that it the definition of an error must therefore be an error?.
It also places the reader immediately within this "right/wrong" dichotomy rather than what I thought the definition was alluding to; "an action that is almost forgetfully narrow minded". It seemed to me from reading this page, that it was as though the person needs to be nudged and reminded that many other factors are at play. Is not the error therefore the process? Not the result?
Isn't it suggesting that this process excludes pertinent information often needed to better or more accurately explain an event? By using an example which makes explicit that the internal referencing was incorrect, and the external correct; adds another level of unnecessary complexity. This process is an error of interpretation that excludes other relevant information. I don't think its important or correct to elevate the internal process as 'always incorrect' and the external always correct. I very much doubt that is in fact the case. I don't know? I didn't see any references to research on how often this processing error leads to correct or incorrect assessments.
Regardless, even then it will be by matter of degree. Is not the central argument simply that people have a tendency to process information in a particular way that excludes information not at hand, external to the immediate viewing, and instead draw internally to produce understanding. And because of that subjectivity, we often see things incompletely or partially or quite inaccurately. Isn't it the processing of information that is pertinent to the definition? Not this ongoing thread of correct and incorrect. Isn't it more about clarity, perspectives and subjectivity?
My 2nd request - this page introduces a number of new theoretical terms to the reader. It also plays them against each other in an attempt to elicit variance between the terms and to produce greater clarity of meaning. Perhaps to a more seasoned reader this is sufficient? However, I found it often deflected and distracted rather than added clarity. The main reason, I believe I struggled to gain as greater clarity as I had hoped for, was the absence of more examples, especially working examples, where the term is employed in such a way to distinguish itself from other terminology used. So in that regard the examples need a two pronged objective. First, to elucidate and produce greater clarity, and second, to highlight how it is both similar and different to the other terminology.
I hope I don't seem critical or negative way? The fact is the page intrigued me enough that I completed reading the full text, something I rarely do. I just know that for me and perhaps other learned but still novice readers, the addition of a few more examples and practical situations would be very helpful. And add to the educational benefit of this page immensely. Thank you.