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My goodness this is a difficult one to address. In essence it is true, and in essence it is untrue. In truth it is a cynic's view of the matter, pure and simple; Which cynic is born of the uncaring, selfish, self-centred, self interested, and thus unholy mess of a world we as human beings have made and therefore live in.

To be continued...

Raymis (talk) 14:48, 6 February 2008 (UTC)Reply


If you could add anything about Ken Burnett on the page that would be super helpful. Also if you made the controversy section seem less one side because when reading the section it does seem a little bias.Overall it is a thorough page with good grammar. Livski1996 (talk) 03:18, 27 April 2018 (UTC)Reply

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Article Review NNGO 350 edit

Overall great page. Controversy section could possibly benefit from a historical example of friendraising with ill intent. Has there been any coverage of organizations friendraising to take advantage of the vulnerable? — Preceding unsigned comment added by BrianJohnNIU (talkcontribs) 17:13, 8 May 2018 (UTC)Reply

Page provides a good overview of the concept. The concept section would benefit from further citation in reference to background on the concept of friend-raising. Providing additional examples, like those in the controversy section, would aid the practice section of the article. Utilize methods of implementation in relation to friend-raising, bringing creditability to the concept and implementation methods. Gio 12 17 (talk) 22:58, 8 May 2018 (UTC)Reply

I think there is good content throughout, but could add more details under each section. Maybe consider adding examples of friend raising and including more scholarly articles on it. — Preceding unsigned comment added by HJMeier10 (talkcontribs) 02:08, 9 May 2018 (UTC)Reply