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Latest comment: 7 years ago5 comments1 person in discussion
Tidied references with sfns and added footnotes. Keith-264 (talk) 13:33, 27 September 2016 (UTC)Reply
Added the expansion and moved title from particular to general. Two sections are incomplete and will be added soon. Keith-264 (talk) 07:53, 4 October 2016 (UTC)Reply
Found time to add a bit but the battle section isn't complete. Keith-264 (talk) 15:52, 7 October 2016 (UTC)Reply
Changed my mind about the battle section and rewrote it (again) using new source. Still to finish. Keith-264 (talk) 18:33, 11 October 2016 (UTC)Reply
Latest comment: 5 years ago3 comments2 people in discussion
@ZuluKane: Greetings Zulu, thanks for taking an interest in the article, it's nice to know that some bugger has read it. ;O); I've had another look at the sections you've ce'd and see your point that the narrative gets a bit disjointed at times, sadly, it was like that in the sources - in the British OH, the BEF goes invisible between the rush into Belgium and the retreat to the French border. I've changed a few things to try to make it smoother but also tried to avoid straying into OR. Hope it helps. Regards Keith-264 (talk) 10:25, 6 May 2018 (UTC)Reply
@Keith-264: I appreciate all the work you've obviously put into this article. (And others I've read; our interests do seem to overlap, in places.)
BTW, it is because I've not read the sources that my edits are generally limited to punctuation, structure, and lite copyediting — doing what I can to help make the text an enjoyable and informative read, while being careful not to edit the cited facts.
Greetings again, Your good faith stands out a mile and it's always nice to learn from constructive criticism. Regards Keith-264 (talk) 06:20, 10 May 2018 (UTC)Reply
