Talk:Françoise-Louise de Warens

Latest comment: 8 years ago by 138.51.126.79 in topic This language?

date of death edit

"Madame de Warens (31 March 1699 in Vevey - 29 July 1762 in Chambéry)" ... "he found out in August of 1768 that his maman, as he called her, had died in poverty in March of that year"

huh? —Preceding unsigned comment added by Camilorojas (talkcontribs) 14:27, 16 November 2008 (UTC)Reply

This language? edit

"Without doubt, she was a very controversial woman, leading a liberal life for a woman of her time." "She gave Rousseau the education he lacked..." Should be more straightforward and without accoutrement. "...that she was putting together." "Rousseau met her...forever changing both their lives." "...and fulfilled his hungry spirit and his need for love." "Rousseau never forgot her..." "...he found out in August of 1768 that his maman, as he called her..." Informal and/or Subjective

Improving this now, let this serve as a long-form reason for changes. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 138.51.126.79 (talk) 16:59, 7 December 2015 (UTC)Reply