Talk:Fibrin scaffold
Latest comment: 14 years ago by Hairhorn in topic Article Organization
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Article Organization edit
This article is extremely difficult to follow and to read. I would highly recommend the author of this article to read through the Manual of Style. Renaissancee (talk) 04:52, 2 June 2009 (UTC)
I am trying to simplify it but it takes time, having some terminology is inevitable and I redirect terms. comments are very helpful to improve it, thank you. --Cmsnmz (talk) 05:58, 2 June 2009 (UTC)
- The jargon needs to be toned down a lot; you need to explain your topic to a lay person, not a colleague. Also, as of this writing, the very first sentence has no main verb, it's a collection of phrases that don't add up to a sentence. That makes it even harder to read. Hairhorn (talk) 15:43, 3 June 2009 (UTC)