Talk:Extra Texture (Read All About It)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: GreatOrangePumpkin (talk · contribs) 15:33, 16 July 2012 (UTC)

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

   Why was the tour controversial? Maybe it was just poorly received?

    Done yeepsi (Time for a chat?) 19:17, 20 July 2012 (UTC)

   "last-ever" - overmphasized, just "last"

    Done yeepsi (Time for a chat?) 19:17, 20 July 2012 (UTC)

   "It is considered to be Harrison's soul album, " - Confusing. Reword it.

    Done But I think, I may have made it more confusing(?) yeepsi (Time for a chat?) 19:17, 20 July 2012 (UTC)

   Yes. How about "Featuring elements of soul music and demonstrating... , the album was something..."--GoP_T^C_N 09:10, 21 July 2012 (UTC)

   Sounds good. Added. yeepsi (Time for a chat?) 09:56, 21 July 2012 (UTC)

   "hit single in the song "You"," - in the song? Maybe "it produced the moderate hit single, "You"". Also how can it be both moderate and a hit single?

   Would "it produced the moderately hit single" work? yeepsi (Time for a chat?) 19:17, 20 July 2012 (UTC)

   Better--GoP_T^C_N 09:10, 21 July 2012 (UTC)

    Done yeepsi (Time for a chat?) 09:56, 21 July 2012 (UTC)

   Why does Forum links to a city?

    Done "Forum shows, in Los Angeles". yeepsi (Time for a chat?) 19:17, 20 July 2012 (UTC)

   "(from Horn)" - Horn is a band?

    Done Jim Horn. Session musician. yeepsi (Time for a chat?) 19:17, 20 July 2012 (UTC)

   The article has too many overemphasized language, eg "last-ever", can be just last

    Done Fixed. yeepsi (Time for a chat?) 19:17, 20 July 2012 (UTC)

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall: Just a few small issues.--GoP_T^C_N 18:44, 20 July 2012 (UTC)

   Pass/Fail:

• Pass Great article! :)--GoP_T^C_N 09:59, 21 July 2012 (UTC)