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My reply
editOk i'll check it. :) Will you also please check my Article [1]] Thank you! Unknown624 (talk) Unknown624 (talk) 00:26, 7 April 2015 (UTC)
Sandbox Review
editGood day! Please fix the format of your headings and add references. Also, there are some errors on your article (e.g. your subject's year of birth is "19799").
Anillaj (talk) 01:21, 7 April 2015 (UTC)
Comments regarding your sandbox
editHi SupermanKael, here are my comments regarding your sandbox article:
Although you were able to list down your references, I noticed that you were not able to cite your sources properly. I suggest reading the guidelines for referencing: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Help:Referencing_for_beginners
I also suggest editing your article further and improving your sentence constructions.
wieluxx
editHi SupermanKael, I have read your sandbox and I have to say that informations are clear. Have a good day! Wieluxx (talk) 01:29, 7 April 2015 (UTC)