Talk:Emprise de l'Escu vert à la Dame Blanche

Latest comment: 5 years ago by CapnZapp in topic Cleanup

Cleanup

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This article looks quite alright at first blush, but on closer examination I have a few issues:

  • no attempt at establishing significance - what impact did the Order have historically? (Even if it had close to none, subject might very well still be notable, but perhaps only as a mention on some "chivalric history of Europe" page...)
  • no inline references, only "literature". What book confirms what claim?
  • no real history - Order is founded, but what happens then? What does the Order do? How long does it exist? etc

I briefly checked Jean II Le Maingre's article, but it had nothing to add. It mentions he founded the order, but then goes on with no more mentions.

TL;DR: What's the point?

CapnZapp (talk) 15:44, 29 March 2019 (UTC)Reply