Talk:Eileen Niedfield/GA3

GA Review

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Nominator: Fortunaa (talk · contribs) 12:43, 6 March 2024 (UTC)

Reviewer: HistoryTheorist (talk · contribs) 02:55, 22 April 2024 (UTC)

Hello! I look forward to reviewing this article. Depending on my schedule, a full review might not come until next weekend, but I hope to review this article in bits and pieces over the week. This review will focus on making original research issues and the other MOS details Airship mentioned, as I trust (but will verify) that the other aspects they checked remain up to GA standards. ❤HistoryTheorist❤ 02:55, 22 April 2024 (UTC)

Good Article review progress box Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV () 3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant () Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

General comments

• Could you provide a digital copy of source #2 please? (I might end up wanting digital copies of all online sources you provided, so be prepared).
  • Actually, if you are able to, could you please email me or leave a message on my talk page with quotes or digital versions of all offline sources?
• School means that this review is taking more time than intended, but I hope to complete it soon.

Early life and education

• I don't know what reference #3 shows for you, but I'm not seeing anything about Niedfield's father being descended from German immigrants and converted from Lutheranism to Catholicism as a young man. All I'm seeing is a record of Niedfield's birth and death dates along with a listing of her parents.
• Ref #4 verifies that Joseph was a firefighter but does not verify that he served in the army during WWI. You're going to need to add another reference or remove it all together.
• I assume that Majorie Niedfield does show up in the Brooklyn Botanic Garden Record, but could you provide me a full quote? The preview on Google Books is acting up and I can't properly view it.
  • I did find this which does verify that she worked as a nurse, but doesn't directly verify that she got a BS in nursing. Alternately, I could modify the text to say that she was a registered nurse.
• Ref #10 only verifies her entering MMS as a postulant and nothing else. Do you have a ref that could back up the rest of the claims?
• Ref #12 doesn't directly support with a Bachelor of Science degree in chemistry, magna cum laude, nor Niedfield took her perpetual vows on August 15, 1945, and her final vows a year later on August 15, 1946.
• Ref #13 doesn't support It was then known as the Catholic Colored Clinic in Atlanta, and later as Southwest Atlanta Hospital, now closed nor the 1947 date.
• Do residencies qualify you as a surgeon? Not super knowledgable about medical school, so please inform me. However, the sources cited don't make it clear that the residency qualified her as a surgeon, so please clarify.

Medical service in India and Bhutan

• Ref #21 verifies little beyond where Nieldfield worked. I think one of the other refs you cited inline might also help back up your claims.