Talk:Edward Wells (RNZAF officer)
Latest comment: 3 years ago by Zawed in topic GA Review
Edward Wells (RNZAF officer) has been listed as one of the Warfare good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it. Review: November 4, 2020. (Reviewed version). |
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I reckon this is over dabbed. There aren't that many Edwards Wells, so Edwards Wells (pilot) should suffice. Cheers, Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 09:54, 1 November 2020 (UTC)
- Peacemaker67, thanks for the advice, I have moved as suggested. Cheers, Zawed (talk) 02:00, 2 November 2020 (UTC)
- No worries mate. Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 05:21, 2 November 2020 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Hog Farm (talk · contribs) 19:39, 2 November 2020 (UTC)
- The second paragraph of the lead contains five sentences all starting with "He". Can this be varied a bit?
- "The Second World War was well underway at the time of Wells' completion of flying training and, now a pilot officer," - Link pilot officer
- "The next month Wells was promoted to flying officer" - Link flying officer
- What was the cause of death?
- The later life section has three sentences starting with "He" and a fourth with "His". Can this be varied?
- Is there a specific reason why RAF Bawdsey is not included in the list of his commands in the infobox
- Considering consolidating the later life and postwar career sections, these are both rather short sections.
- External link is about Alan Deere, doesn't look relevant
Looks good beyond those little points, placing on hold. Hog Farm Bacon 20:31, 2 November 2020 (UTC)