Talk:Dwarf cuttlefish
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Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment edit
This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 14 January 2019 and 29 April 2019. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): JazzyBre. Peer reviewers: Annielowen, Rjholt24.
Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT (talk) 08:58, 17 January 2022 (UTC)
Peer review edit
·Lead: -Needs to include more information regarding important facts about the species than just a simple description of the body. Should include a brief overview of all the relevant info you plan to bring up. -Also doesn't flow very well, consider rephrasing some sentences. ·Sections: -No sections, need to organize everything into sections that break up details you're discussing into categories -Need to include A LOT more information to properly educate readers of the page about the species -Throughout the entire page only one reference is noted, if you have 7 sources you should be citing everyone as a footnote somewhere in the writing. Use the sources you've found to add more information and give a better overview. ·Neutral content: -Does a good job avoiding bias, all the information is given as a fact and stated firmly. ·References: -Of your 7 sources only one is a peer reviewed journal article published in a reputable journal. It's fine to have a few outside website sources other than journal articles but they shouldn't be the majority.
-Overall this page needs quite a bit of work before it should be finalized and submitted. Work on finding reliable published journal articles and read through them, taking notes, to see what discoveries were made about the species during the experiment so you have new and credible information to include in your final draft. Make sure you break up the page into sections and include important details, synapomorphies, and other relevant info in each section. Great start just make sure you keep working on it! Good luck! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Rjholt24 (talk • contribs) 13:12, 18 March 2019 (UTC)