Talk:Dragonball Evolution/GA1
Latest comment: 11 years ago by Hahc21 in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Hahc21 (talk · contribs) 16:12, 25 August 2012 (UTC)
Review edit
The article does not meet the criteria at this time. So i will have to quickfail it. The reasons:
- Lead does not meet WP:LEAD
- I see several sentences without a source.
- The article has a 'bare url' tag since May 2012
- Also, the prose is not fluent. I see several one-line sentences that make no flow on the text.
These issues must be fixed before renominating. I haven't checked the sources in detail, but there may be some unreliable sources. I suggest a copyedit. — ΛΧΣ21™ 16:12, 25 August 2012 (UTC)