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Latest comment: 8 years ago2 comments2 people in discussion
The following problems need to be resolved before it can measure up to any kind quality assurances:
The article needs a lot of copyediting.
The quotes are dull and consist of nothing but stereotypical school pep.
The image syntax is really terrible and the choice of images is very unencyclopedic. Pictures of small student groups are not the least bit relevant to an encyclopedia. A few (about 4-6) pictures of exterior and interior is more than enough.
The article is in effect unverifiable since this school "School Improvement Plan" doesn't seem to be something one can find at the local library.
A lot of the article reads like a pamphlet and there is an excruciating amount of detail about the education of individual teachers, the merits of members of the student's union and other forms of trivia.
There are too many lists and tables. If they can't easily be converted into prose, they should probably be removed altogether.
There are several references to Kevin Ray, the article author himself, which may be a problem. Even if this reference is relevant, linking to one's own user page in article mainspace is not. See Wikipedia:Avoid self-references.
When improving the article, try to write with someone who has no initial interest or knowledge about the topic in mind. Currently, it reads more like a recruitment pamphlet than an encyclopedic article.
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