Talk:Do Shapeshifters Dream of Electric Sheep?

GA Review

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Reviewer: Queenieacoustic (talk) 12:12, 11 June 2011 (UTC)

Comments

Ratings

1. "and a 2/5 share 18–49." You need to explain "18-49."

Reviews

1. MTV is not a magazine, and should therefore not be italicized.
2. Since Anna Torv is already mentioned once in the article, you only need to refer to her by her last name the second time.

In conclusion

The article looks good overall, just a few issues need to be fixed. I'll put it on hold for seven days meanwhile. Queenieacoustic (talk) 12:12, 11 June 2011 (UTC)

All fixed here as well. Thanks again for the reviews! :) Ruby2010 comment! 19:32, 11 June 2011 (UTC)

Passed. Queenieacoustic (talk) 19:41, 11 June 2011 (UTC)

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