Talk:Digging Your Scene/GA1
Latest comment: 7 years ago by Cartoon network freak in topic GA Review
GA Review edit
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Reviewer: Cartoon network freak (talk · contribs) 07:40, 31 December 2016 (UTC)
Lead edit
- as the second single from the parent record → remove "single" here
- Done
- where several of whom agreed it would succeed → with several agreeing it would succeed
- and number 14 → and at number 14
- Done
- reached number nineteen → reached number 19
- Done
- American band Ivy created a cover → You may better use "recorded" here, as "created" sounds not ok
- Done
- Release year for Guestroom in brackets
- Done
Infobox edit
- The second release date in the infobox may be overfluous
Composition and lyrics edit
- with influence from from → one "from" is enough ;)
- Done
- he worries: "Tell me → : to ,
- Done
- Release year for She Was Only a Grocer's Daughter in brackets
- Done
- He wrote: "Dr. Robert → : to ,
- Done
Critical reception edit
- a programmer for Billboard → a programmer from Billboard
- Done
- that its sound → state "the song" or smth else here as you're introducing a new subtopic
- Done
Chart performance edit
- In the lead, you say the single peaked at number 19 in the UK
- Done
- second highest peaking single → second-highest peaking single
- Done
- number 5 → only numbers up to ten are written like this; number five
- Done
- also peaked at number sixteen → also peaked at number 16
- Done
- number 7 mark → number seven mark
- Done
- thirteenth week on Canada's → 13th week on Canada's
- Done
- numbers sixteen → numbers 16
- Done
- twenty-five and twenty-three → 25 and 23
- Done
Music video edit
- was released sometime in 1986 → remove "sometime"; 1986 is enough here
- Done
- Music & Media Conference, that took place → no comma here
- Done
Track listings and formats edit
- flawless ;)
Charts edit
- flawless ;)
Release history edit
- use "rowspan="2" for RCA
- Done
Promotion and use in media edit
- This section should be moved after "Music video"
- Done
- other is flawless ;)
Ivy version edit
Background and development edit
- coos lines like: "I'm like a boy → : to ,
- Done
Infobox edit
- Isn't there any cover for this version?
- That's weird, isn't it? Ivy's official catalog lists it as a CD single, but with my educated guess it may have been packaged with a similar cover as seen on "Edge of the Ocean". However, since I can't find any confirmation I'm not gonna add an image :(.
Critical reception edit
- version. He wrote: "Durand's → version, writing, "Durand's
- Done
- so natural...if you → ... to [...]
- Done
Track listing edit
- flawless ;)
Release history edit
- flawless ;)
Other stuff edit
Copy-violation edit
- 9.9% is super!
Images edit
- Perfectly illustrated by images ;)
Links edit
References edit
- As far as I checked them, the references do cover the assertations made in this article (I can't verify some things, but I trust you ;))
- No dead links! Good job!!
Outcome edit
- On hold for 7 days! Good luck, Cartoon network freak (talk) 08:35, 31 December 2016 (UTC)
- @Cartoon network freak: Wow you're fast! Thanks so much again for the review. Always is appreciated. Carbrera (talk) 16:33, 31 December 2016 (UTC)
- Gladly passing! Cartoon network freak (talk) 16:58, 31 December 2016 (UTC)
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