Talk:Desert of Wales
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Grammar?? edit
"...although the substantial area of moorland to the north of this road including the reservoirs of Nant y Moch and Llyn Clywedog."
There's something wrong with this phrase, it seems to lack an active verb. "Including" isn't a verb even though "include" is.
Try taking take the words "to the north...Clywedog" and substituting "here" - you could then paraphrase the whole thing as "although the moorland here." See what I mean?
Perhaps this phrase has been inadequately translated from Welsh? At any rate, it definitely doesn't make sense as it stands! Edetic (talk) 05:59, 3 March 2008 (UTC)
- > Perhaps this phrase has been inadequately translated from Welsh? < Hardly likely given that – as the article says – the very term "Desert of Wales" is not used in Welsh. The area, incidentally, is perhaps more frequently referred to (by writers in English) as the Green Desert of Wales... -- Picapica (talk) 11:56, 20 November 2009 (UTC)
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