Talk:Der Herr ist mein getreuer Hirt, BWV 112
Latest comment: 7 years ago by Sainsf in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 13:24, 9 June 2016 (UTC)
Coming to this soon. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 13:24, 9 June 2016 (UTC)
- Lead
- "Chorale cantata" is linked twice
- removed one, but linked 2nd cycle
- "Movement" may be linked
- yes --GA
- History
- the Lord as the good shepherd May be "good shepherd" should be in title case?
- fine --GA
- While during the cycle...paraphrase of Psalm 23 A long long line, I think we can split and rephrase this for clarity. I can give a suggestion, but first tell me who "he" refers to in "he used the hymn text here unchanged".
- split --GA
Rest looks good to me. Cheers, Sainsf (talk · contribs) 11:56, 11 June 2016 (UTC)
- Thank you, a fourth time! You are amazing! --Gerda Arendt (talk) 12:00, 13 June 2016 (UTC)