Talk:Denyse Benoit
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Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment edit
This article is or was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Sandyderulo. Peer reviewers: Filmstudiesclass01, Kay2416.
Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT (talk) 19:58, 17 January 2022 (UTC)
Peer Review edit
Hello. Here are a few suggestions that could improve your page:
- Maybe adding her birthday beside her name in parenthesis rather than having it under Early Life and Education. This could be found in other Wikipedia pages.
- There are a couple of instances where you will translate names of institutions in English but I think that maybe you can keep the name in French and add beside the English translation.
- Grammatical errors to check up on more as well as errors in school names.
- If you use accents in location names I would try to stay consistent with it.
- The second sentence under Career is missing Italics for the films.
- Statements like "Back in Quebec" or "In (insert date)" could maybe use more commas.
- In Career you use the word crue in a sentence other than the title of her film. If non-French speakers read it they may not know what it is. So maybe you can use flood as you did previously in that paragraph.
- Maybe you can mention what French Festival it is in the last sentence of your second paragraph in Career.
I find that your subject is interesting and that you did a great job overall.