Talk:Dennis H. Holtschneider

Want to revise bio; COI

Hello. I work at DePaul. The subject of this bio is our current president. He is stepping down in June. He will become COO of Ascension Health. With your permission, I would like to add this sentence to the end of the opening paragraph.

On June 30, 2017, he will step down as president of DePaul. On July 1, 2017, he will become executive vice president andchief operating officer of Ascension. He will step down from the Ascension board on that date.

Could a neutral editor please make this addition or give me permission to proceed?

Kris (talk) 17:58, 17 January 2017 (UTC)

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Want to revise format of bio and update background info; COI

Hello. I’m a Wikipedia donor and thought I would start the new year contributing in yet another way, since I am a communication professional. I will start with my employer. I work at DePaul University and therefore have a conflict of interest in making changes directly to the bio page for our president, Dennis H. Holtschneider. I’m requesting the help of a neutral editor to consider my suggestions below. I will only make the changes myself if a neutral editor gives me permission to do so. I’m happy to discuss my suggestions and provide further references, if you wish.

I would like to modify the format of his page to be more consistent with the presidents of other prominent Catholic universities in the United States, such as these: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/John_I._Jenkins University of Notre Dame https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Jo_Ann_Rooney Loyola University Chicago https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/John_J._DeGioia Georgetown University

Concurrently, I would revise his bio with updated information, such as his chairmanship of the nation’s largest Catholic and non-profit health system and service on other important boards, as well as noteworthy awards and publications, etc. I was judicious in what I proposed, including mostly recent content, but if you prefer comprehensiveness, I can offer that. Note that I grouped existing content about issues that occurred on campus during his presidency under a section I named “Campus Issues,” but these types of issues do not appear in the comparison entries. I leave it to the neutral editor to determine their inclusion or not. Revised Entry Suggestion:

Dennis Henry Holtschneider[1] (born January 14, 1962) is the president of DePaul University in Chicago, United States. He was chosen by the Board of Trustees as the university's president in spring 2004 and took office in July 2004.[2] Since 2014, he has chaired the board of Ascension, the nation’s largest Catholic and non-profit health system. He joined this board in 2009 and served as its vice chair and as chair of the audit and model community committees and as a member of the governance task force and finance committee. Early Life: A native of Detroit, Michigan, he is a 1985 graduate of Niagara University with a bachelor's degree in Mathematics.[2] He is a member of the Congregation of the Mission, an order of Catholic priests founded by St. Vincent de Paul and commonly referred to as Vincentians. He received a doctorate in Higher Education Administration from Harvard University in 1997.[2] Career: Prior to joining DePaul, Holtschneider served as Executive Vice President and Chief Operating Officer of Niagara University from 2000 to 2004.[5] He taught and served in several academic administrative roles at St. John's University between 1996 and 1999. Holtschneider was the Director/Rector of Vincentian College Seminary in Ozone Park, New York from 1989 to 1992. Since 2008, he has been a faculty member in the Harvard Graduate School of Education, teaching seminars and institutes on strategy, governance and management development, among others. He also taught summer institutes on strategic planning at the Villanova University Center for the Study of Church Management from 2006-2010. Governance: Holtschneider has served in leadership roles on several national advocacy boards for higher education. He joined the American Council on Education’s Board of Directors in 2013, was a trustee for the National Association of Independent Colleges and Universities in 2012-13, and was a trustee for the Association of Catholic Colleges and Universities from 2009 to 2015, including serving as chair of that board from 2010-2012. He spent five years as a member of the school board for Chicago Catholic Schools (2009-14) and nine years as a trustee of the Chicago Historical Society/Chicago History Museum (2007-2016). Honors and Affiliations: Holtschneider holds seven honorary degrees, the most recent of which was awarded in December 2016 from Soka University in Tokyo. In 2015, he received the American Council on Education’s Council of Fellows Mentor Award, recognizing his guidance in preparing the next generation of academic leaders in higher education. In 2012, he was noted as one of Diversity MBA Magazine’s Top 100 under 50 Diverse Executive Leaders, and in 2011 he was honored by the Archdiocese of Chicago with its “Strangers No Longer Award” for his leadership on comprehensive immigration reform. Publications: Holtschneider has written extensively on higher education strategy and governance. Trusteeship Magazine published his article, “Strategic Capacity: Strengthening University Boards to Govern Strategy” in its November/December 2016 issue. His chapter on “Raising Academic Quality: A Playbook,” appeared in Strategies for University Management in 2016. His chapter “Strategy” appeared in the 2015-2016 Presidential Perspectives Higher Education Thought Leadership Series Innovative Concepts to Achieve Campus Transformation. Campus Issues: In 2016 he likened Black Lives Matter protesters who disrupted a speaking event to D-Day troops[10] and said the authorized speaker Milo Yiannopoulos was unworthy of speaking there.[11] On June 16, 2016 he announced he would step down as president despite previously planning to remain until 2019. In recent letters to the campus, he apologized for poorly handling race relations which had become worse around Yiannopoulos' speaking event.[12] In 2010, Holtschneider came under fire due to the denial of tenure to six minority professors at DePaul.[9] Despite the fact that all white candidates for tenure during that year were approved, Holtschneider consistently denied that race placed any role during the tenure process. In fall of 2010, 19 percent of DePaul's full-time faculty members were minorities.[9] In 2007, Holtschneider affirmed a 4–3 vote by DePaul University's Board on Promotion and Tenure (a faculty board) denying tenure to controversial political scientist Norman Finkelstein.[6] Holtschneider was criticized by individuals and external organizations, including the DePaul Academic Freedom Committee[7] and the American Association of University Professors, for not overturning the faculty board's decision. Finkelstein and the university subsequently negotiated an agreement that included placing Finkelstein on administrative leave for the 2007–2008 academic year, the remainder of his contract with DePaul.[8] ````

Proposed revision

I propose to make the following revision to this page. Do any other editors have concerns?

Current

Holtschneider has been widely criticized by for denying the very popular DePaul professor Norman Finkelstein tenure and then putting him on academic leave rather than letting him teach his final year as is the academic norm (http://news.google.com/news?hl=en&ned=&ie=UTF-8&ncl=1120006322).

My proposed revision

In 2007, Holtschneider affirmed a 4-3 vote by DePaul University's Board on Promotion and Tenure (a faculty board) denying tenure to controversial political scientist Norman Finkelstein. [1] Holtschneider was criticized by individuals and external organizations, including the DePaul Academic Freedom Committee [2] and the American Association of University Professors for not overturning the faculty board’s decision. Finkelstein and the university subsequently negotiated an agreement that included placing Finkelstein on administrative leave for the 2007-2008 academic year, the remainder of his contract with DePaul. [3]

See

Main article: Dershowitz-Finkelstein affair

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Proposed addition of fact

I propose to add the following fact.

In fall of 2010, 19.5 percent of DePaul's full-time faculty members were people of color.

Kris (talk) 14:45, 29 August 2011 (UTC)

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Job change update and added sources

Updating job information and adding sources. I have a conflict. Two jobs ago, this person worked at my institution and now holds title of honor here. Can a neutral editor review and publish these revisions?

Revised opening paragraph:

Dennis Henry Holtschneider[1] (born January 14, 1962) is president-elect of the Association of Catholic Colleges and Universities. Previously, he served as Executive Vice President and Chief Operations Officer for Ascension, the nation's largest Catholic health system, with oversight responsibility for the Ascension Solutions Division subsidiaries of Ascension Technologies and the Ascension Ministry Service Center, as well as Ascension’s national Strategy and Advocacy functions. From 2004 through 2017, he was the president of DePaul University in Chicago, where he continues to hold the honorific position of chancellor.

Moore, Paula (December 4, 2018). "ACCU Announces Rev. Dennis Holtschneider, CM, as Its Next President" (PDF).

Barr, Diana (January 22, 2019). "Ascension realigns operations, 3 top executives to exit".

Rhodes, Dawn (January 12, 2017). "Retiring DePaul president to take job in Catholic health nonprofit".

Under the Governance section -- Revised opening paragraph

Holtschneider chairs the boards of Niagara University and the Institute of Advanced Catholic Studies at the University of Southern California. He has served in leadership roles on several national advocacy boards for higher education, including the American Council on Education’s Board of Directors in 2013, the National Association of Independent Colleges and Universities in 2012-13, and was a trustee for the Association of Catholic Colleges and Universities from 2009 to 2015, including serving as chair of that board from 2010-2012. He spent five years as a member of the school board for Chicago Catholic Schools (2009-14) and nine years as a trustee of the Chicago History Museum (2007-2016).

Freedman, Michael (October 10, 2017). "Father Holtschneider, Jacobs-Vogt, Nicholson Named to Niagara University Board of Trustees".

"The Institute for Advanced Catholic Studies at USC". Retrieved February 25, 2019.

Regarding the citation request in the Careers section: The Vincentian College Seminary in Ozone Park closed many years ago and no longer has a web page.

Under the Honors and affiliations Section – here are five of the cites requested: 4 for honorary degrees and one for an ACE award.

"Adamson University to confer honorary degree on DePaul University president". July 5, 2012.

"College of Saint Elizabeth Holds 108th Commencement May 15, 2010". May 18, 2010.

"Advocate for Catholic Education to Address Marywood Graduates,". March 18, 2015.

"2013 Honors Convocation and Commencement Exercises," (PDF). Fall 2013 issue. Retrieved February 25, 2019. {{cite news}}: Check date values in: |date= (help)

"Holtschneider Receives 2015 ACE Council of Fellows/Fidelity Investments Mentor Award". March 15, 2015.

Denise Mattson (talk) 21:46, 28 February 2019 (UTC)

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