Talk:Deloitte/Archives/2020
Latest comment: 4 years ago by Dormskirk in topic Lead doesn't cover all important aspects
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It's a French name. French ancestries? — Preceding unsigned comment added by 87.91.51.235 (talk) 05:07, 2 February 2020 (UTC)
- See William Welch Deloitte for the ancestry of the founder. Dormskirk (talk) 09:53, 2 February 2020 (UTC)
Lead doesn't cover all important aspects
Sorry, I tagged it but then had to go out. Se WP:LEAD. As it stands, the lead doesn't mention anything about controversies. "The lead serves as an introduction to the article and a summary of its most important contents." " It should identify the topic, establish context, explain why the topic is notable, and summarize the most important points, including any prominent controversies." @Dormskirk: I hope you see my point. Right now the is too short, doesn't cover all that it should, and stretches what should be at most two paragraphs out to three. Doug Weller talk 09:11, 24 April 2020 (UTC)
- OK. I see your point and will add a bit more on history and something on controversies in particular. Thanks for explaining. Dormskirk (talk) 09:13, 24 April 2020 (UTC)
- @Doug Weller: I have had a go at expanding the lead. I hope it is OK now. Best wishes. Dormskirk (talk) 10:35, 24 April 2020 (UTC)
- @Dormskirk: I'm really impressed. You've done an excellent job, it's a much better lead. Thanks. Doug Weller talk 11:14, 24 April 2020 (UTC)
- @Doug Weller: Great. Many thanks for your kind words. Dormskirk (talk) 11:18, 24 April 2020 (UTC)