Talk:Deadalive/GA1
Latest comment: 12 years ago by Ruby2010 in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Ruby2010 (talk · contribs) 20:47, 17 March 2012 (UTC)
Will review soon. Ruby 2010/2013 20:47, 17 March 2012 (UTC)
Comments edit
- "...after Mile's body..." -> Miles'
- "Doggett realizes that if he leaves, the office will be closed since Scully will so be going on maternity leave" Needs rephrasing
- Input actor name for Billy Miles? (for consistency)
- No need for hospital wikilink (common word); same with shower
- later reveals... later reveals (2 sentences in a row; could use a little switching up)
- "many felt that the season would be the shows last" -> show's last
- Photo double or stunt double?
- Critical Myth is a website and has no print equivalent (as a far as a I know), so it should not be italicized. Same for BBC
- I don't quite understand the Television Without Pity review comment. What picture? (One of Duchovny)?
- Love the Fringe send out! :) Not surprised this one beat out "Unearthed," it certainly sounds cooler (and the Fringe episode was pretty crucified by critics). I may have to integrate that UGO article into some Fringe pages
- Ref 4: Is the August date a retrieval date?
Otherwise, looks good. Will place on hold while above comments get addressed. Thanks, Ruby 2010/2013 21:19, 18 March 2012 (UTC)