Talk:Cyprus in the Eurovision Song Contest 2006/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: AryKun (talk · contribs) 19:13, 2 March 2024 (UTC)

• Made a c/e to fix what I saw as more minor issues instead of listing them here.
  • Much appreciated! I wish all reviewers made the easy changes as they read through! Grk1011 (talk) 13:37, 11 March 2024 (UTC)
• "was when it placed second to last in the 1999 contest with "Tha'nai erotas" by Marlain Angelidou" to "was in 1999, when it placed second to last with "Tha'nai erotas" by Marlain Angelidou"?
• "both to compete at Eurovision" I'd cut "to compete at Eurovision", it's obvious from context.
• "The event took...website cybc.cy." Run-on sentence, should be split up.
• "In each semi-final...to the final" You already mentioned this earlier.
  • I left this in because it's helpful for readers who don't want to read about the entire format and instead jump to the tables for the results. It's one sentence, so I hope it's not too bad. Grk1011 (talk) 13:37, 11 March 2024 (UTC)
• "The song was written...in the past" Extremely long sentence, need to be split up.
• I'll spot-check refs later.
• That's all I got. Nice work!

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@AryKun: I've taken a look at your initial comments and made some changes! Grk1011 (talk) 13:37, 11 March 2024 (UTC)

Did some spot-checks and found nothing off, so passing now. AryKun (talk) 03:24, 12 March 2024 (UTC)