Talk:Crystallized self

Latest comment: 1 year ago by Rjgoodwin in topic Organization and clarity


Changed one of the sections edit

I replaced the section called "popular conceptions" with "The Theory Behind The Metaphor". I looked at the source the previous writer used and found evidence of plagiarism. I hope my section follows protocol better. Please let me know of any changes that should be made.Maddieaalund (talk) 01:15, 15 March 2017 (UTC)Reply

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Organization and clarity edit

The article had some good information but the organization made it a little challenging to understand. I think if the order that the information was present adjusted, or even laid out in the introductory paragraph, it might make the Crystallized self a page with more clarity.

Rjgoodwin (talk) 03:14, 3 May 2023 (UTC)Reply