Talk:Cormier wrestling family

Latest comment: 13 years ago by Lord Roem in topic GA Review
Good articleCormier wrestling family has been listed as one of the Sports and recreation good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
Good topic starCormier wrestling family is the main article in the Cormier wrestling family series, a good topic. This is identified as among the best series of articles produced by the Wikipedia community. If you can update or improve it, please do so.
Article milestones
DateProcessResult
March 6, 2011Good article nomineeListed
April 16, 2011Good topic candidatePromoted
Did You Know
A fact from this article appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the "Did you know?" column on August 20, 2009.
The text of the entry was: Did you know ... that professional wrestling promoter Emile Dupré has said that the Cormier wrestling family (Yvon, Jean-Louis, Leonce, and Romeo) "were to New Brunswick what the Hart family was to Calgary"?
Current status: Good article

GA Review edit

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Reviewer: Lord Roem (talk) 18:04, 1 March 2011 (UTC)Reply

Doing this as part of the GA Backlog Elimination Drive. Article on review for at least 7 days before failed if changes listed below not resolved. Regards, Lord Roem (talk) 18:04, 1 March 2011 (UTC)Reply
First thing I notice - are there no pictures you can add? Probably would make the article appear nicer :) Lord Roem (talk) 18:18, 1 March 2011 (UTC)Reply
One of the guys just got a free image in the article, so I went ahead and added that. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 17:12, 3 March 2011 (UTC)Reply

Lead

  • Brothers in the last sentence should be removed. Rephrase. -- Lord Roem (talk)
  • "Still wrestle occasionally" - relevant?
    • I believe that it is. The article gives a quick overview of their careers, so it seems worth noting that two of the careers are still going. GaryColemanFan (talk) 06:16, 5 March 2011 (UTC)Reply

Family

  • Need a cite at the end of the sentence about their names being too hard to pronounce.
    • It was covered by the reference at the end of the paragraph, but I added another citation. GaryColemanFan (talk) 06:16, 5 March 2011 (UTC)Reply
  • Is "(Rudy)" a nickname?
    • The article explains that Jean-Louis was given the name because he looked like another wrestler named Rudy Kay. GaryColemanFan (talk) 06:16, 5 March 2011 (UTC)Reply

Brothers

  • This section is ok, but go over it to make sure you don't have extraneous/non-relevant material.
    • I believe that it does a good job of sticking to the important points in giving a quick summary. GaryColemanFan (talk) 06:16, 5 March 2011 (UTC)Reply

Legacy

  • Not much here about legacy, more of just modern feelings on them. Maybe add more to specific impacts they had on the sport?
    • There haven't been many specifics in the stories written about them, but I added some information about major stars that they helped out by either training or employing them. GaryColemanFan (talk) 06:16, 5 March 2011 (UTC)Reply

The general guideline is 7 days to resolve these issues before a decision is made on Promotion. Best regards, Lord Roem (talk) 02:58, 2 March 2011 (UTC)Reply

Thanks for the review. I nominated this so long ago that I had completely forgotten about it. I believe that I have addressed all of your concerns, but please let me know if anything else needs work. GaryColemanFan (talk) 06:16, 5 March 2011 (UTC)Reply
Great! Moving to promote now. Lord Roem (talk) 20:15, 6 March 2011 (UTC)Reply