Talk:Coat of arms of Sevastopol/GA1

Latest comment: 4 years ago by Jordano53 in topic GA Review

GA Review edit

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Reviewer: Jordano53 (talk · contribs) 02:41, 14 May 2020 (UTC)Reply


I'll take this one. First GA review for me, quite exciting. Jordano53 (talk) 02:41, 14 May 2020 (UTC)Reply

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

Very nice article! A few minor tweaks and I think it should be good to go.

  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose, spelling, and grammar):   b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):  
  • Place link at first instance of Sevastopol City Council in lead
  • "From July 21, 1893 until the October Revolution in 1917..." + "...has been struck down by the Legislative Assembly on July 3, 2019 due to the criticisms..."
    A comma needs to be added after the years.
  • "...alongside the 2018 Russian presidential election, however was later cancelled due to time constraints."
    A pronoun should go in between "however" and "was".
  • As this topic concerns Russia, date formats should be "dd-mm-yyyy".
  1. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (reference section):   b (citations to reliable sources):   c (OR):   d (copyvio and plagiarism):  
    Very well sourced. Passes Earwig's Copyvio Detector.
  2. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):   b (focused):  
  3. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:  
  4. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:  
  5. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):   b (appropriate use with suitable captions):  
    Might be beneficial to caption the coat of arms in the "19th century" section. Not very clear what it refers to when reading the article.
  6. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:  

Thanks Jordano53 for the review and I am glad you like the article; I have made the necessary changes. Thanks, Toreightyone (talk) 23:02, 17 May 2020 (UTC)Reply
@Toreightyone: Great! I made two slight changes to the article if that is okay with you. Otherwise, this article should be good to go and I have passed it. Jordano53 (talk) 23:25, 17 May 2020 (UTC)Reply