Talk:Cheryl Tunt/GA1
Latest comment: 11 years ago by Ruby2010 in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Ruby2010 (talk · contribs) 03:34, 3 August 2012 (UTC)
Will review this soon. Ruby 2010/2013 03:34, 3 August 2012 (UTC)
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- There are a few dab links. More to come. Ruby 2010/2013 03:35, 3 August 2012 (UTC)
- Done
- Links for Malory Archer and Cecil Tunt?
- I wikilinked Malory Archer, but I did not do the same for Cecil Tunt. She has only mentioned her brother only once or twice in the series.
- What is the Judy Greer quote referring to? What has become her family? Her work place? (Note that I've never watched this series before)
- Somewhat related to the above comment, I think the article would benefit from a quick overview of the series (i.e. what the premise and setting are)
- Both quotes address her personality. For the overview, do you want me to put it in the lead?
- "... characteristics an adopts..." - and?
- Done
- I'm sceptical that Greer is "best known" for her work in Arrested Development (and the article cited lists many productions she's been in)
- Done
- Arc and personality: indicate who Adam Reed is and link him (then remove the link in the below development section)
- Done
That's about it. I'll place the review on hold for seven days. Thanks, Ruby 2010/2013 16:49, 4 August 2012 (UTC)