Talk:Carrs-Safeway

Latest comment: 13 years ago by Mr. Corgi in topic Serious need of editing

Serious need of editing edit

I came across this article tonight and found that it is in desperate need of editing. There are no references or citations, and there were numerous spelling, grammar, and formatting problems, some of which I have already fixed. I added the "Citations Missing" template to the page (if I did this wrong, please let me know), and I removed the Slogan section, as it was not only very poorly written (incomplete sentences, no citations, and outdated information).

The article also borrows heavily from the main Safeway article, especially the section on rebranding. I'm going to try to edit this the best I can on my own, but a little help would be greatly appreciated.--Mr. Corgi (talk) 11:58, 17 November 2010 (UTC)Reply