Talk:Breakin' Point (song)
Latest comment: 5 years ago by PancakeMistake in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: MarioSoulTruthFan (talk · contribs) 20:54, 30 March 2019 (UTC)
Infobox edit
- Fine
Lead edit
- Written by the band and produced by Emile Haynie → Peter Bjorn and John wrote the song and also handled additional prodution with Emile Haynie.
- They are both producers you can include (add) in the infobox to be more specific. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 11:29, 6 April 2019 (UTC)
- The single only charted in the Belgian region of Wallonia, where it appeared below the top 50 of the Ultratip chart. → remove, see the reason below on the charts section.
- That's a major difference believe me. It's not the bubbling under in Belgium, the bubbling under its the "Tipparade", that's under that. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 11:29, 6 April 2019 (UTC)
- It charted? Where?? I see no position! MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 16:16, 7 April 2019 (UTC)
CHARTS
Ultratip Bubbling Under: 11/06/2016 / Tip / sem.: 4
It charted as a tip. Pancake (talk) 12:04, 8 April 2019 (UTC)
- It peaked below that, with no position, which is my main argument. If there is no peak position why make a charts table with it? MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 00:08, 9 April 2019 (UTC)
- I think we might be getting somewhere here. Let's remove the charts table and this type of sentences need to be re-worked "The single only charted in the Belgian region of Wallonia, where it appeared below the top 50 of the Ultratip chart. " → it didn't chart, "The single only appeared below the top 50 of the Ultratip chart", or something in this vein, what do you think? MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 12:08, 9 April 2019 (UTC)
Done
Background edit
- Rename the section to "Background and prodution"
- Lasse Mårtén mixed "Breakin' Point" and Henrik Jonsson mastered the recording at Masters of Audio in Stockholm → should be in the end of the first paragraph.
- Done.
- I will handle additional changes to this paragraph. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 17:35, 4 April 2019 (UTC)
Done
Composition and lyrics edit
- Instead of a picture a music sample would be more appropriate.
- It features instrumentation provided by an electric bass, percussion, a synthesizer, and a zither. → symphonic strings, digital beats are accompanied by a slightly sorrowful whistling melody → very different from what you say, the rest is just the same.
- I think you're missing the first citation. Pancake (talk) 18:32, 5 April 2019 (UTC)
- It was missing. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 12:41, 9 April 2019 (UTC)
- I think you're missing the first citation. Pancake (talk) 18:32, 5 April 2019 (UTC)
Done
Release and reception edit
- Ingrid issued a 7-inch vinyl on 13 May 2016 → Their label, Ingrid, issued a 7-inch vinyl on 13 May 2016 (it' confusing with the studios and the label sharing the same name)
- I know but it's confusing just simplified like I did and we are good. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 15:21, 8 April 2019 (UTC)
- Commercially, "Breakin' Point" only charted in the Belgian region of Wallonia; it did not enter the Ultratip chart, but debuted as an "extra tip" below the top 50 on the week of 11 June 2016. The song remained there for four weeks → remove all of this see the reason below.
Done
Music video edit
- The desert scenes where shot in Wolin National Park and additional scenes were shot nearby a river outside of Warsaw → The desert scenes where shot in Wolin National Park and additional scenes nearby a river outside of Warsaw.
- Done.
- Świebodzin → Świebodzin, Poland
- The statue could be from any other place in the other world, plus it is not a famous city like NY, London, Paris or any other. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 19:47, 6 April 2019 (UTC)
- Styx → same as previous, needs context and place
- Done.
Done
Formats and track listing edit
- Should add the 7-inch format
- Is the Promotional CD single available for purchase or is just a promo for local radios, critics and labels? If so remove it.
Done
Credits and personnel edit
- Peter Bjorn and John – additional production → shouldn't they also be on the infobox as well?
@PancakeMistake: We are only missing this, I will take a look at the rest in the meantime.
Charts edit
- If it peaked below the top 50 of the Ultratip chart, then don't include it. N/A doesn't excuse it being here.
Done
Release history edit
- Fine
Notes edit
- Same as charts.
References edit
- Remove publisher from reference 9, you already have work on it. Henceforth you don't need both. Otherwise you would need to add both work and publisher to all other sources.
Done
External links edit
- Fine
Overall edit
- You can now address this changes. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 17:36, 4 April 2019 (UTC)