Talk:Brawl in Cell Block 99

Latest comment: 1 year ago by Sinoam in topic Copy editing
Good articleBrawl in Cell Block 99 has been listed as one of the Media and drama good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
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DateProcessResult
September 25, 2022Good article nomineeNot listed
December 2, 2022Good article nomineeListed
Current status: Good article


Copy editing edit

Notice to editors that I am copy editing this article. Other editors are welcome to post questions and comments here. šŸŒŠPacificDepthstalk|contrib 20:20, 19 November 2022 (UTC)Reply

User:Sinoam What does "It was screened out of competition" mean in the lead section? Can this be re-worded to say the film was screened at the Venice Film Festival? šŸŒŠPacificDepthstalk|contrib 21:33, 19 November 2022 (UTC)Reply
It means that the film did not participate in the competition at the Venice Film Festival. - ē„å„½ļ¼ŒSinoam(čŠå¤©) 21:59, 21 November 2022 (UTC)Reply
"Vaughn and Carpenter were Zahler's first picks for the film's main cast, with Zahler wanting Vaughn in the film to be different from the comedic roles that Vaughn usually plays" - I can't find the source that says the actors were the first pick šŸŒŠPacificDepthstalk|contrib 21:33, 19 November 2022 (UTC)Reply
"This filming style is similar to Buster Keaton, Fred Astaire, and Jackie Chan, where there is little editing as possible and allowing the actors to play in-person." this seems not relevant to the Casting section šŸŒŠPacificDepthstalk|contrib 07:43, 20 November 2022 (UTC)Reply

I made some edits which I think make the article read better. Please leave feedback and comments here. šŸŒŠPacificDepthstalk|contrib 02:37, 21 November 2022 (UTC)Reply

Thanks for the copy-editing. It was sorely needed to be re-nominated for GA. ē„å„½ļ¼ŒSinoam(čŠå¤©) 22:00, 21 November 2022 (UTC)Reply