Talk:Bombing of Tokyo (10 March 1945)/GA1
Latest comment: 6 years ago by Zawed in topic GA Review
GA Review edit
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Reviewer: Zawed (talk · contribs) 06:57, 11 April 2018 (UTC)
I'll do this one, comments to follow over next few days. Zawed (talk) 06:57, 11 April 2018 (UTC)
Comments edit
Looks really good Nick, only two substantive points:
- Infobox: Shizuichi Tanaka is mentioned as a commander/leader but doesn't appear to be mentioned anywhere in body of article.
- Departure section: "in bands between 5000 to 7000 feet" for consistency with other measurements, shouldn't it be 5,000 to 7,000, plus conversions?
Other stuff edit
- No dab links
- Dupe links: firebombing; night fighter
- External links all work
- Images appear to have appropriate tags
Will check back in a few. Cheers, Zawed (talk) 01:51, 15 April 2018 (UTC)
- Thanks a lot for your review: I think that I've now addressed those comments. Nick-D (talk) 04:57, 15 April 2018 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
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