Talk:Bobby Peel/GA1
Latest comment: 10 years ago by Sahara4u in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Sahara4u (talk · contribs) 02:28, 22 January 2014 (UTC)
Lead
edit- "...,and was highly regarded by critics." → and was highly regarded by cricket critics.
- "..and was highly regarded by critics." → well-known
Yorkshire cricketer
edit- Link "drawn"
- "At the time, the Yorkshire team was generally inconsistent." In which aspect? They were not playing frequently or else?
Test debut
edit- "...not usually composed exclusively of the best cricketers in England." → Needs inline citation.
- "The previous English tour Australia..." → The previous English tour of Australia ...
- "Critics considered..." again "Cricket critics considered..."
Home Test matches
edit- "...match figures of 11 for 68." match-figures?
- "...158 runs in his second innings, his maiden first-class hundred." At that time?!
- At the end of the season, Hawke ended the careers of several players; the Yorkshire president told the committee that the "demon drink" was to blame.[44]" I think this sentence is unrelated to the para?
Australian tour of 1894–95
edit- Link to Melbourne Cricket Club
- "After having five teeth extracted,[60]..." why?
- ...the fifth day's play, Australia had scored 113 for two,..." We know that Test matches were of 6 days at that time, but most of our reader don't know this, I guess.
- You may link "pair"
- Link "duck" at the first instance
- "...and 168 runs at 18.67, placing him sixth in the batting averages.[78]" → ...and scored 168 runs at 18.67, placing him sixth in the batting averages.[78]
- "... to be eighth in the averages,..." → "to be" is redundant
Final seasons
edit- "Against Warwickshire, he scored 210 not out, the highest first-class score of his career,..." in an innings?
Later life
edit- The first para ends up with 1904 and the following para starts in 1898?
- Wilfred Rhodes → Rhodes
Technique and personality
edit- His main rival as a spinner and for a place in the England team was Johnny Briggs; Peel bowled faster, which made him harder to hit,[3] Archie MacLaren, who captained England towards the end of Peel's career and was a team-mate and captain of Briggs, described Peel as "the cleverest bowler of my time". → a very long sentence
- "He batted in the middle order,[84] including when he played for England, when he most often batted at number six,[17] and often effective when other batsmen had failed.[3]" no need of "when he"
Images
edit- All the images should have a proper ALT text.
A well-written article! I'll put this one on hold, and will be back to this as the above concerns resolve. —Zia Khan 02:28, 22 January 2014 (UTC)
- I think that should be everything. Thanks for the review. Sarastro1 (talk) 18:44, 22 January 2014 (UTC)
- You may link ESPNcricinfo and CricketArchive in the references. —Zia Khan 14:18, 23 January 2014 (UTC)
Assessment
edit- GA review (see Wikipedia:Good article criteria and WP:GACN)
- Well-written.
- a (clear and concise prose which doesn't violate copyright laws, grammar and spelling are correct): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, and fiction:
- a (clear and concise prose which doesn't violate copyright laws, grammar and spelling are correct): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, and fiction:
- Factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (well referenced): b (citations to reliable sources): c (Wikipedia:No original research):
- a (well referenced): b (citations to reliable sources): c (Wikipedia:No original research):
- Broad in its coverage.
- a (covers major aspects): b (well focused):
- a (covers major aspects): b (well focused):
- Neutral .
- Fair representation, no bias:
- Fair representation, no bias:
- Stable.
- No edit wars nor disputed contents:
- No edit wars nor disputed contents:
- Illustrated appropriately by images.
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- Conclusion: Good work with the article. Keep it up! —Zia Khan 21:12, 23 January 2014 (UTC)
- Pass/Fail: