Talk:Bernardo Quintana Arrioja
Latest comment: 13 years ago by Thelmadatter in topic Untitled
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Untitled edit
I did some editing on the article. You need to proofread and add some citations. Also, is the "presea" award seems to be something named after Quintana, not something he received.Thelmadatter (talk) 12:26, 22 October 2010 (UTC)
This is one of the worst articles written in Wikipedia. It is evident that very little research was done beforehand. The use of grammar and prose is non-existent. == some editing ==
I did some editing on the lead and first section of the article, taking out a lot of the "flowery" language. Please look at the changes I made, so you can apply similar ones in other parts.Thelmadatter (talk) 18:12, 27 October 2010 (UTC)