Talk:Banksia speciosa/GA1
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Reviewer: Sasata (talk · contribs) 23:35, 15 June 2013 (UTC)
I'll review this. Sasata (talk) 23:35, 15 June 2013 (UTC)
Comments. Some suggestions/nitpicks are more FAC-level, but I figured you wouldn't mind :) Lit check later. Sasata (talk) 01:41, 18 June 2013 (UTC)
- I've always figured was more useful for the opening sentence of a species article to indicate its family, rather than its genus, as the latter apparent from the binomial. Note also that the lead sentence says "Banksia" three times.
- don't need to be told twice in the first two sentences that it's a plant
- link shrubland, bushfire
- "Though widely occurring, it is highly sensitive to dieback and large populations of plants have succumbed to the fungus." 1st: Phytophthora cinnamon is not a fungus; 2nd: wouldn't it be more accurate to say "succumbed to the disease", as the start of the sentence mentions dieback, not the causative organism?
- "The flowers attract nectar and insect-feeding birds" -> nectar- (or nectar-feeding)
- how about adding who first described the species and when in the lead?
- isn't 8 m closer to 26 feet?
- any chance of including a picture that shows its singly-stemmed, many-branched habit?
- "…triangular lobes which have a zigzag pattern" which->that
- please split the massive 1st paragraph into a couple more digestible ones
- and contains one or two viable seeds. ->contain?
- link follicle
- check throughout for too many sigfigs in the conversion 2cm->0.79 in and 2 mm->0.079 in (might consider rounding off 20 cm->8 in throughout as well)
- link for Gibson area?
- has the Gibson area variant been described as a distinct taxon?
- link George on 1st appearance, and give first name. I'm not sure he needs to be quoted for his use of "broadly obovate"; is this contrary to how others describe the cotyledon shape?
- done. There is an issue with cotyledon shape - subsequent review of banksia shows that there are two subgenera which can be distinguished on cotyledon shape (cuneate vs obovate) - George described this as obovate but it more resembles a blunted cuneate and is in fact in the subgenus with cuneate cotyledons (and looks like them on silhouette). This is not discuessed really anywhere. The best I can do is quote the sources. Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 13:35, 18 June 2013 (UTC)
- "and is a smaller more open shrub." comma after smaller?
- link Ferdinand Bauer, Investigator, common name, series, conserved, sister
- "The genus Banksia L.f. (Proteaceae)" -> "The genus Banksia L.f. (Proteaceae)"?
- what is the name for the bioregion in whch the population at Point Cuver occurs?
- "It is often the dominant shrub in shrubland, often found with" often … often
- redlink Phyllachora banksiae (it'll turn blue eventually …)
- "A specimen flowered in a greenhouse in the Royal Botanic Garden Edinburgh in 1830." Is this notable enough to include? Is it unusual to flower in "captivity"?
- is Brown (1810) or Meissner (1856) in Latin?
- check for consistent title case in book titles/sentence case in journal article titles (or whatever format you're using), consistent location formatting, and page range formatting
- don't need to give publisher for journal Australian Systematic Botany
- more specific page number for ref#16 (Lamont et al. 1991)
- italicize binomial, ref#17
- location for ref#20?
- what methods are used to control dieback?
- Phytophthora taxon niederhauserii Z. G. Abad and J. A. Abad[1] has also been recorded afflicting this species:
- Title: Phytophthora taxon niederhauserii, a new root and crown rot pathogen of Banksia spp. in Italy.
- Author(s): Cacciola, S. O.; Scibetta, S.; Martini, P.; et al.
- Source: Plant Disease Volume: 93 Issue: 11 Pages: 12–16 doi:10.1094/PDIS-93-11-1216C Published: 2009
- this looks interesting: "… B. speciosa dominated the responses, with greater seed release than expected, fewer initial seedlings, lottery survival of 1st year seedlings and greater survival of 2nd year seedlings, when compared with the previous stages. Large seeds and subsequent high growth rates enabled B. speciosa to exploit soil water preferentially during the severe summer drought."
- Title: A TEST FOR LOTTERY RECRUITMENT AMONG 4 BANKSIA SPECIES BASED ON THEIR DEMOGRAPHY AND BIOLOGICAL ATTRIBUTES
- Author(s): LAMONT, BB; WITKOWSKI, ETF
- Source: OECOLOGIA Volume: 101 Issue: 3 Pages: 299-308 doi:10.1007/BF00328815 Published: MAR 1995
- Seed bank dynamics:
- Title: SEED BANK DYNAMICS OF 3 COOCCURRING BANKSIAS IN SOUTH COASTAL WESTERN AUSTRALIA - THE ROLE OF PLANT-AGE, COCKATOOS, SENESCENCE AND INTERFIRE ESTABLISHMENT
- Author(s): WITKOWSKI, ETF; LAMONT, BB; CONNELL, SJ
- Source: AUSTRALIAN JOURNAL OF BOTANY Volume: 39 Issue: 4 Pages: 385-397 doi:10.1071/BT9910385 Published: 1991
- you could add Kuntze 1891 as a source from here
- since there's a section on cultivation, you might mention the seedlings seems to be "moderately tolerant to salinity" from here
- Title: Effect of Salinity on Seedling Emergence of Seven Banksia Species Cultivated for Cut Flower and Foliage
- Author(s): Rodriguez-Perez, J. A.
- Source: JOURNAL OF PLANT NUTRITION Volume: 32 Issue: 9 Pages: 1540-1550 Article Number: PII 913565942 DOI: 10.1080/01904160903093844 Published: 2009
- Robert's Brown's protologue is available here doi:10.1111/j.1096-3642.1810.tb00013.x, or free from Wikisource or BDH (see p.210; Florabase says this is the protologue, I see reference #9 is also Brown 1810, but a different publication)
- minor referencing nit: decide whether to have spaced or unspaced author initials
After having confirmed that all images are properly licensed, I'm confident that this article meets all of the GA criteria and will now promote it. Good luck at FAC! Sasata (talk) 05:42, 25 June 2013 (UTC)