Talk:Baaj Nwaavjo I'tah Kukveni – Ancestral Footprints of the Grand Canyon National Monument

Latest comment: 6 months ago by PrimalMustelid in topic Did you know nomination

Did you know nomination edit

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The result was: promoted by PrimalMustelid talk 10:02, 15 October 2023 (UTC)Reply

 
Kanab Creek Wilderness within the monument

Created by Reywas92 (talk). Self-nominated at 02:59, 15 August 2023 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/Baaj Nwaavjo I'tah Kukveni – Ancestral Footprints of the Grand Canyon National Monument; consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.Reply

  •   New and long enough, but with many paragraphs missing references, the article needs more work before it is eligible to appear on the Main Page. I also question the need for such a long title; most cited sources refer to the monument by a shorter name. Surtsicna (talk) 00:28, 3 September 2023 (UTC)Reply
Added or copied souces to the rest of the paragraphs. Looks to me that pretty much all the sources that came after the designation use the full name, as do most others. This is what the monument is called... — Preceding unsigned comment added by Reywas92 (talkcontribs) 01:19, 5 September 2023 (UTC)Reply
Surtsicna, do these edits address your concerns? BlueMoonset (talk) 19:54, 17 September 2023 (UTC)Reply
  Long enough, new enough, and now properly sourced. I have not detected any copyright issues. The hooks are as concise as they can be considering the title of the article and reasonably interesting. I will leave a hook suggestion in case someone would like to review the ALT2 hook before those already approved are promoted. Surtsicna (talk) 17:00, 24 September 2023 (UTC)Reply

ALT2: ... that after years of tribal and conservationist campaigning, US President Joe Biden declared a culturally important area around the Grand Canyon to be a national monument in order to protect it from uranium mining?

  • Added location to this, I don't like vague hooks. Reywas92Talk 04:19, 27 September 2023 (UTC)Reply

Can someone please approve this? I'm fine with my originals or alt2. Reywas92Talk 22:57, 12 October 2023 (UTC)Reply

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✠ SunDawn ✠ (contact) 15:16, 23 September 2023 (UTC)Reply