Talk:Asset.tv

Latest comment: 7 years ago by Cyberbot II in topic External links modified

Conflict of interest tag edit

This article, which feels quite promotional in style (although a layer of promotion has been scraped off), was written by a user who included first-person statements ("Asset.tv's secure, open standards' based infrastructure is designed to be fully, and immediately inter-operable, with users of our data streams and suppliers of value-added data; partners require only a secure HTTPS connection to the Internet." - emphasis added.) --Nat Gertler (talk) 15:35, 6 September 2011 (UTC)Reply


I made a mistake in the grammar of my sentence, however I have taken it down to assess appropriate changes--Pseudo1 (talk) 08:09, 7 September 2011 (UTC)Reply

I have restored the tag. This article still feels like a company-written brochure, still appears likely to have been written with a conflict of interest. --Nat Gertler (talk) 12:42, 7 September 2011 (UTC)Reply

Directors edit

I removed the "Directors" section, as it was written like material from a company brochure and not appropriate for an encyclopedia article. AndrewWTaylor (talk) 09:30, 7 September 2011 (UTC)Reply

Directors edit

Re-added the "Directors" section, however, I completely removed any excess 'padding' that could be considered brochure-like - hopefully making the material appropriate for this article --Pseudo1 (talk) 10:19, 7 September 2011 (UTC)Reply

What little remained was largely redundant with earlier material, and much that wasn't redundant was both unsourced and of questionable import, and it was too little material for the number of subsections it involved. I have integrated some of the material in with where the original directors were listed. --Nat Gertler (talk) 12:53, 7 September 2011 (UTC)Reply
Thank you very much. Also will be going through the paragraphs very soon the remove and alter any jargon.--Pseudo1 (talk) 13:44, 7 September 2011 (UTC)Reply

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