Talk:Art Rooney Jr./GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: WikiOriginal-9 (talk · contribs) 06:27, 20 October 2023 (UTC)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

Notes

• added marine and stage actor cats
• hmm, those sources dont actually say he was PR Director from 1961 to 1964

That's all I think. Nice work. WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 06:27, 20 October 2023 (UTC)

• @WikiOriginal-9: This source from 1962 mentions him as public relations director - I could find mentions of him in that role from '61, '63 or '64, though - what would you suggest? BeanieFan11 (talk) 02:04, 21 October 2023 (UTC)
  • Adding all those sources. WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 02:30, 21 October 2023 (UTC)
    • @WikiOriginal-9: Sorry, I meant to say that I couldn't find mentions of him in that role in those years. BeanieFan11 (talk) 02:38, 21 October 2023 (UTC)
      • "and as the team's public relations director" change to "and also spending time as the team's public relations director"? Change infobox to say "Various roles"? WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 03:03, 21 October 2023 (UTC)
        • @WikiOriginal-9: Changed. BeanieFan11 (talk) 03:21, 21 October 2023 (UTC)

All points have been addressed. Passing the article. Nice work! WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 03:24, 21 October 2023 (UTC)