Talk:Antonín Kinský/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: TheQ Editor (talk · contribs) 19:37, 30 May 2014 (UTC)

I am accepting this review. It may take at most 7 days for the review to complete. TheQ Editor (Talk) 19:37, 30 May 2014 (UTC)

Wow! I'm impressed. There are not as much errors as I usually find, possibly making this by far the easiest article to review.TheQ Editor (Talk) 20:49, 30 May 2014 (UTC)

Sorry for not checking on this earlier. I forgot this whole thing. But nice to see it all tidy and ready to go for good article status.TheQ Editor (Talk) 13:38, 1 June 2014 (UTC)

Review

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose, no copyvios, spelling and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

Notes

Well written

• In seven years in Russia he played 200 competitive games -change to For seven years in Russia, he played 200 competitive games Y reworded.
• In July 2000 Kinský -add comma after 2000 Y
• in October 2002 Kinský -add comma after 2002 Y
• the worst match in [his] life. -what's the [his] doing? Y the original quote is just "Byl to snad můj nejhorší zápas v životě" (English: It was probably the worst match my in life), I added [his] per WP:Quotations but, yes, I have altered the quote to accurately reflect the source.
• for the player -change to for Kinský. Y
• In October 2008 Kinský -add comma after 2008 Y
• later in the decade -when? Y added year
• tournaments, UEFA Euro 2004 -the UEFA Euro 2004 N not commonly called "the Euro yyyy"

Referencing

• ref 10 is a dead link. See Wikipedia:DEADREF Y replaced

Broadness

• Section Personal Life needs expanding Y expanded, however he seems to be a very private individual as although there is a lot of content available about his football career, very few details of his private life have been published.

NPOV

Stability

Images

• infobox image needs an appropriate suitable caption Y added