Talk:André Bouchard (policeman)

Latest comment: 1 year ago by Cameron Dewe in topic Tone

Tone edit

I added the Over-quotation and Tone clean-up template tags because this article is meant to be a biography and told in an impartial and relatively formal TONE. Excessive slang should be avoided, even in quotations, as it normally does not improve an article's quality. The number of quotes in this article makes it read like Bouchard, himself, is telling the story from his point of view. Wikipedia articles ought to have an objective and balanced voice that explains, what happened in Bouchard's life. His opinions about that life need to be balanced with others opinions about him and his actions, in order to put things in perspective. - Cameron Dewe (talk) 09:58, 23 May 2022 (UTC)Reply