Talk:An Son (archaeological site)

Latest comment: 2 years ago by IronRose26 in topic Style

Peer Review edit

I just did a peer review of your page and I think you're doing a great job so far. I like the content topics you picked, and I think your use of an image was helpful, I encourage that you use more images throughout the rest of your article as you develop it. I would also suggest that you make sure to keep your article neutral so that your article doesn't become an argumentative article. I think the layout of your article is organized and makes sense, keep it up! Ksaldan3 (talk) 22:17, 27 February 2022 (UTC)Reply

Wiki Education assignment: Archaeology of Southeast Asia edit

  This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 4 January 2022 and 18 March 2022. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Kbee2, Sarpayton (article contribs). Peer reviewers: Ksaldan3, Jaypanda95, Mp3frog, Julie Foss.

Style edit

This is a great article, but it reads a bit more like a school essay than an encyclopedia page. The last section before the sources just a summary of the above sections. — Preceding unsigned comment added by IronRose26 (talkcontribs) 18:56, 29 March 2022 (UTC)Reply