Talk:Allie Gonino

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Opening Blurb edit

In the brief introductory paragraph before the fill article, the fact that she was on The Lying Game is mentioned twice and it doesn't read well. Can the last five words of the sentence: "Gonino is currently in the band The Good Mad, who were featured in The Lying Game, in which Gonino also starred." be removed without effecting the existing source citation? ClarinetMinuet (talk) 00:55, 27 November 2017 (UTC)Reply

That can be restructured, possibly into two separate sentences. But the overall information conveyed (including the source) shouldn't be removed... BTW, the "opening" is called the lead/lede. --IJBall (contribstalk) 00:56, 27 November 2017 (UTC)Reply