Talk:Albert Fish/GA1
GA Reassessment edit
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This is certainly an interesting topic that is unfortunately in shambles. One obvious issue it is covered in Citation needed templates. Another problem this article has is its formatting. An example of this is shown:
McDonnell's friends told the police that he was taken by an elderly man with a gray mustache. A neighbor also told the police he observed the boy with a similar-looking man walking along a grassy path into the nearby woods. Francis's mother, Anna McDonnell, said she saw the same man earlier that day. She told the reporters:
He came shuffling down the street mumbling to himself and making queer motions with his hands ... I saw his thick gray hair and his drooping gray mustache. Everything about him seemed faded and gray.
Those are the problems I see but this may need some more input. GamerPro64 02:16, 15 August 2013 (UTC)
- Well bullocks I almost forgot about this nomination. I'm just gonna now close it and have the article demoted. GamerPro64 01:46, 2 September 2013 (UTC)