Talk:Aging of the United States

Latest comment: 2 years ago by Z1720 in topic Did you know nomination

Did you know nomination edit

The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Z1720 (talk) 22:28, 21 August 2021 (UTC)Reply

Created by Mover of molehills (talk). Self-nominated at 00:35, 12 July 2021 (UTC).Reply

Oppose because it is not true. The United States's fertility rate, with the exception of a brief boom in the mid-2000s has been below replacement levels for decades. funplussmart (talk) 17:34, 18 July 2021 (UTC)Reply
@Funplussmart: Thank you for clearing that up, and for making the correction in the article. Do you think that the main hook could still be valid, though? Mover of molehills (talk) 12:25, 19 July 2021 (UTC)Reply
  No opinion on notability of the article, I will review according to DYK rules. Date (just) in time, length fine and hook is sourced and inlinely cited. However @Mover of molehills: this can't proceed with the merge tag on it. QPQ is not needed as this is Mover's first nomination. No close paraphrasing. Please ping me once that merge discussion is concluded and I can pass this. The C of E God Save the Queen! (talk) 08:52, 27 July 2021 (UTC)Reply
Comment I don't love ALT0 actually. For one thing it's not all that interesting on its own, for another it is "an alarmist term in eugenics" which is...well it's about as racist as it sounds. Also, the newspaper article cited is actually misleading, and the person who made the article mistakenly attributed Roosevelt's speech to 1900. In reality, the speech quoted was delivered in 1906, I assume the date of 1900 refers to the birth rate statistic. This doesn't mean we can't have it in a hook, but it ought to have a bit more context as that fixes all of those issues imo. I'm proposing ALT2 for this. I have also edited the article to correct the date. BuySomeApples (talk) 03:37, 28 July 2021 (UTC)Reply
@BuySomeApples: Thank you, I think that's a good point. I like Alt2 as well. Additionally, @The C of E: I did complete the merge, so let me know when you're ready to continue with the nomination. Mover of molehills (talk) 14:59, 1 August 2021 (UTC)Reply
@Funplussmart: Do you have any more comments? Mover of molehills (talk) 16:31, 4 August 2021 (UTC)Reply
I do not like ALT0 or because due to it being not very remarkable and seems to support racism and eugenics. I am neutral regarding ALT2 as it has added context. funplussmart (talk) 20:54, 4 August 2021 (UTC)Reply
Just a comment that the main hook and ALT2 needs to specify with President Roosevelt? Franklin of Theodore? You have linked to Theodore Roosevelt; so I guess it should specify the first name too. It might confuse some readers. Thanks! – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 15:29, 14 August 2021 (UTC)Reply
Good catch @Kavyansh.Singh:, I fixed that in both hooks. @Mover of molehills: what do you think about the different hooks? BuySomeApples (talk) 04:40, 17 August 2021 (UTC)Reply
@BuySomeApples: I think Alt2 looks good! After the review process, I'm similarly lukewarm about the other hooks. Mover of molehills (talk) 12:25, 17 August 2021 (UTC)Reply
@The C of E: Now that the merger has been completed, would you mind giving this nom another look? BuySomeApples (talk) 05:47, 21 August 2021 (UTC)Reply
  OK, continuing as above. There's no close paraphrasing. As for the hook, I'm happy to pass the original but ALT2 is acceptable if the promoter feels context is needed. Good to go. The C of E God Save the Queen! (talk) 07:46, 21 August 2021 (UTC)Reply
Promoted ALT2 to T:DYK/P2 Z1720 (talk) 22:28, 21 August 2021 (UTC)Reply

Proposed merge of Aging in the American workforce into Aging of the United States edit

The two articles describe essentially the same subject. Title of the merge to article would be consistent with articles describing the phenomenon elsewhere. funplussmart (talk) 17:16, 18 July 2021 (UTC)Reply

Support, I didn't know the original article existed. @Funplussmart: how many votes do we need before we can go through with the merge? Mover of molehills (talk) 12:12, 27 July 2021 (UTC)Reply
Support: Aging in the American workforce is a weird title to me as well. Merging it makes a lot more sense. BappleBusiness (talk) 01:50, 30 July 2021 (UTC)Reply