Talk:A Tale of Two Cities (Lost)/GA1

Latest comment: 12 years ago by Miyagawa in topic GA Review

GA Review edit

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Reviewer: Miyagawa (talk) 11:46, 28 May 2011 (UTC)Reply

I'll be reviewing this article shortly. I'll give it a couple of read through now and add notes below as I go. If I see anything straight forward, I'll do it myself but if I inadvertently change something important than by all means reverse as normal. Miyagawa (talk) 11:46, 28 May 2011 (UTC)Reply

  • Casting: Final line of the paragraph - would it be fair to add to the end of the sentence something like "after each of their characters were written out at the end of the previous season."?
  • References: Can you check the date formats on the citations - I think it's just #26 which uses a different format and needs to be corrected.

An extremely well written article, only had to make a few minor adjustments with just the one case of overlinking. The Production section in particular is very interesting. Happy to grade to GA once those minor points above are addressed.

Good job! Miyagawa (talk) 12:09, 28 May 2011 (UTC)Reply

Fixed both. Thanks for the review! Much appreciated, Ruby2010 comment! 21:46, 28 May 2011 (UTC)Reply
Thanks for the updates, I believe this now meets the GA criteria and I'm happy to regrade it as such. Miyagawa (talk) 11:00, 1 June 2011 (UTC)Reply