Talk:AAFMAA

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• Added archive https://web.archive.org/web/20110707072326/http://pub.aafmaa.com/aafmaaweb/AnnualReports/2009%20Annual%20Report.pdf to http://pub.aafmaa.com/aafmaaweb/AnnualReports/2009%20Annual%20Report.pdf
• Added archive https://web.archive.org/web/20110206162025/http://www.docstoc.com:80/docs/54867637/Army-and-Air-Force-Mutual-Aid-Association---Strategic-Analysis-Review to http://www.docstoc.com/docs/54867637/Army-and-Air-Force-Mutual-Aid-Association---Strategic-Analysis-Review
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• Added archive https://web.archive.org/web/20110326210608/http://www.aafmaa.com:80/Services/Overview.aspx to http://www.aafmaa.com/Services/Overview.aspx
• Added archive https://web.archive.org/web/20110502180639/http://www.aafmaa.com:80/LifeInsurance/SoldiersandAirmen.aspx to http://www.aafmaa.com/LifeInsurance/SoldiersandAirmen.aspx

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Advertising

I have just now restored the ad template template which was recently removed. The article still includes excessive levels of detail which all imply significance and legitimacy. Even with independent sources, this article would not contain this level of detail. Further, the anecdote about the Battle of the Little Bighorn is... folksy. It may be true, but the source doesn't appear reliable. Describing life insurence policies as "products" is acceptable in limited contexts, but its use here verges on being a WP:BUZZWORD. If the article is trimmed, or if these details are supported and contextualized based on independent sources, it will be appropriate to remove the advertising template. Grayfell (talk) 02:50, 5 May 2020 (UTC)

I have made some changes, please review and let me know if the tag can be removed. Few requests for clarification - what makes the level of detail imply significance in this case? I have left some description of products, policies etc to provide context, for example - explain what is "Trust management" in the context of the article's subject, without coatracking. In addition, a description of services provides for a full understanding of the association, which is null without description of its function. Same goes for eligibility, which is the framework for the association's activity. As for WP:BUZZWORD, how so? it is an offered product of the association discussed (more so - its reason for existence). Best Pratat (talk) 09:04, 5 May 2020 (UTC)

• Change the Treasurer from COL Carlos Perez Js., USA, Ret. to Mark H. Matsuura, Chief Financial Officer:

• The holder of the role has changes:

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• Change LTC Jerry Quinn (USAR) to COL Jerry Quinn (USAR):

• Jerry's ranked has changed.

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• Change title under Charlene Wilde from Assistant Secretary to Senior Vice President and Assistant Secretary:

• Charlene's role has changed.

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• Change AMS has branch offices in Morrisville, North Carolina; Fayetteville, North Carolina; Wilmington, North Carolina; Tempe, Arizona; Denver, Colorado; Dallas, Texas; Reston, Virginia; and Virginia Beach, Virginia to provide assistance and services to members. to AMS has locations and/or local Military Mortgage Advisors in Morrisville, North Carolina; Fayetteville, North Carolina; Wilmington, North Carolina; Tempe, Arizona; Denver, Colorado; Dallas, Texas; Reston, Virginia; and Virginia Beach, Virginia to provide assistance and services to members.:

• The serviced locations have changed.

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• Change In 2016, AAFMAA formed AAFMAA Mortgages Services LLC (AMS) to provide mortgage products to Members. AAFMAA Mortgages Services LLC is headquartered in Morrisville, North Carolina with branch offices in Fayetteville, North Carolina; Wilmington, North Carolina; Reston, Virginia; and Virginia Beach, Virginia. to AMS has locations and/or local Military Mortgage Advisors in Morrisville, North Carolina; Fayetteville, North Carolina; Wilmington, North Carolina; Tempe, Arizona; Denver, Colorado; Dallas, Texas; Reston, Virginia; and Virginia Beach, Virginia to provide assistance and services to members.:

• The serviced locations have changed.

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Mlpearce (talk) 18:58, 3 March 2023 (UTC)

References

 Not done: Please cite proper sources and use proper references formatting; see WP:CITEHOW. Best regards, -- Johannes (Talk) (Contribs) (Articles) 19:01, 6 May 2023 (UTC)