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The contents of article seem to look good to me. Your article does well in addressing the outline straightforward to the readers. I think the topic is relevant as well as I check this group on google. So, this should be a good article for this class project. However, you might want to include picture and reference list of comments. The introduction (to me is what is the group about?) looks a bit longer than it should be. You could include the name of group leaders something like that. Or even you might include the picture of the group as well. I think including the picture would make the article seems to be more informative and make more sense to the readers (as we assume the readers do not have any prior knowledge about this topic). I think if you could include these elements, your wiki page would be more awesome and comprehensive for future. I do not think the article you have here would be applicable to my own article since they are distinct in terms of industry and media images.

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  This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 14 January 2020 and 1 May 2020. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Pjbottam. Peer reviewers: Phuongdong0701.

Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT (talk) 15:45, 18 January 2022 (UTC)Reply