Talk:2312 (novel)

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Plot - Swan and Fitz Wahram edit

There's an errant pronoun at the end of the sentence: ″After the funeral procession, a conference is held among the family and the close friends of Alex (some of whom Swan has never heard of, including Fitz Wahram, a native of the moon Titan, whom Swan dislikes).

I'm not too sure who "whom" is referring to. Is it Fitz or Titan? Logically, it shouldn't be referring to Fitz: The parenthetical side note is about people Swan has never heard of. She cannot dislike someone she has never been exposed to, until she meets or learns about them. Might be better to break this into 2 sentences MXMLLN (talk) 09:02, 10 May 2020 (UTC)Reply