Talk:2016 Jim Beam strike

GA Review

This review is transcluded from Talk:2016 Jim Beam strike/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: GhostRiver (talk · contribs) 23:19, 4 December 2021 (UTC)

I'll be taking a look at this! — GhostRiver 23:19, 4 December 2021 (UTC)

Good Article review progress box Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV () 3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant () Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

Infobox and lede

• Delink Kentucky per MOS:OVERLINK
  • Done.
• Missing "included" or a synonym after The primary concerns of the members involved,
  • Done.
• "distilleries were reporting" → "distilleries reported"
  • Done.
• Comma after "resumed on October 18"
  • Done.
• De-quote "contingency plan" per MOS:QUOTEPOV and per the fact it is not in quotes in the body
  • Done.

Background

• Delink "Kentucky" per above
  • Done.
• No comma after "from large alcohol companies"
  • Done.
• "at their facilities in Clermont and Boston, Kentucky"
  • Done.
• "was trying to get" → "wanted"
  • Done.
• "would not cause any noticeable shortage," → "would not have a significant effect on product availability,"
  • Done.
• Then link "shortage" in "could cause shortages"
  • Done.
• "about 5" → "about five" per MOS:NUMERAL
  • Done.

Course of the strike

• Comma after "in Loretto, Kentucky" per MOS:GEOCOMMA
  • Done.
• "On October 21," → "The next day,"
  • Done.
• "was in general successful" → "was a general success"
  • Done.

References

• Add "|url-access=limited" to anything from The Courier-Journal
  • Done.
• A couple unreliable sources used, but the Post uses an expert, and the "World Socialist Web Site" is used for uncontroversial facts

General comments

• Photo used is relevant and available for use
• No stability concerns in the revision history
• Earwig's copyvio tool is not working for me at the moment, so I am assuming good faith based on previous GA reviews and some spot checks
• This is a general question more than anything. Your strike articles often include some section on long-term impact; it has been five years since the Jim Beam strike, so are there any more developments we can pull from that? I wouldn't include the 2019 warehouse fire, since that was an act of God, which is why I am asking in curiosity.
  • Unfortunately, I was not able to find much information on the long-term impact of the strike from any reliable sources, but if I do, I will be sure to update the article accordingly.

Thank you for your patience. Putting on hold now. — GhostRiver 17:19, 18 December 2021 (UTC)

GhostRiver, I just wanted to reach out and say that I have made some edits to the article addressing the comments in your review. Thank you again for beginning this review, and if there are any further comments, questions, or concerns, please feel free to reach out. -JJonahJackalope (talk) 18:35, 18 December 2021 (UTC)

No worries on the long-term impact; you can't be expected to include information that doesn't exist. Passing now. — GhostRiver 15:35, 28 December 2021 (UTC)

Did you know nomination

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The result was: promoted by Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 15:15, 10 January 2022 (UTC)

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• ... that the 2016 Jim Beam strike was the first labor strike in the company's history? Source: source
  • Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Crackhead Barney

Improved to Good Article status by JJonahJackalope (talk). Self-nominated at 13:51, 30 December 2021 (UTC).

• Hi JJonahJackalope, review follows: article promoted to GA on 28 December; article is cited inline throughout to what look to be reliable sources; I didn't find any issue with overly close paraphrasing; hook fact is interesting, mentioned in the article and checks out to source cited; a QPQ has been carried out. Looks fine to me. One query, the background section notes that new employees were on $17.22 and then the "Course of the strike" section states "there would no longer be a two-tier wage system with some employees earning $17.22 per hour". I initially read that as some employees would now earn $17.22 an hour, but I guess it means that new employees would no longer be on the lower rate? Is there a way to clarify this? - Dumelow (talk) 17:56, 30 December 2021 (UTC)
  • Dumelow, thanks for beginning this DYK review, I've made a slight edit to that section to clarify. -JJonahJackalope (talk) 03:09, 31 December 2021 (UTC)

Thanks JJonahJackalope, all good - Dumelow (talk) 07:40, 31 December 2021 (UTC)

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Promoting the main hook to Prep 1 – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 15:15, 10 January 2022 (UTC)