Talk:2016 24 Hours of Le Mans/GA1
Latest comment: 5 years ago by MWright96 in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Kpgjhpjm (talk · contribs) 04:29, 25 September 2018 (UTC)
Lead edit
- 263,500 people attended the event. can be reworded as The event was attended by 263,500 people.
Background edit
- No issues
Circuit changes edit
- No issues
Entries edit
- No issues
Garage 56 edit
- No issues
Debutants edit
- No issues
Reserves edit
- Why did TDS Racing withdraw ?
Qualifying edit
- No issues
Race edit
- Conway overtook Bernhard on the way into the first Mulsanne Chicane for second and took the lead from Bernhard at the eighth lap's conclusion. How can Conway pass Bernhard for both first and second .
- Four hours and fifty minutes in Rao spun at the Dunlop Chicane. can be reworded to Four hours and fifty minutes into the race , Rao spun at the Dunlop Chicane.
Comments edit
@MWright96: Sorry for rhos taking such a long time. The article is very good and these fixes will bring it to GA status. Kpgjhpjm 13:00, 13 October 2018 (UTC)