Talk:2010 Twenty20 Cup final/GA1
Latest comment: 4 years ago by The Rambling Man in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 10:42, 2 April 2020 (UTC)
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- "known for sponsorship purposes as the 2010 Friends Provident t20 Final" this isn't mentioned in the article, just the lead, and isn't ref'ed.
- Could mention the umpires in the lead.
- Any idea of the attendance?
- "Twenty20 competition" do you mean "Twenty20 Cup" here?
- " their third final and " drop "final".
- "won the title based on the fact they had lost fewer" -> "won the title having lost fewer"
- 'Benson & Hedges Cup' why in apostrophes?
- "to leave the county" probably better to say "club"
- "given odds of 8–1 by" doesn't sound great for a favourite, but could be more easily understood if you said how many teams were in the contest.
- "they were touted" Somerset were touted...
- Link "ball" first time.
- D–L uses an en-dash.
- " as "murky". Kieswetter" ref quote.
- " he'd faced" he had..
- "got out " -> "were dismissed"
- Might need to link fielding positions.
- "inside edge " jargon? Link?
- "and 2 sixes" two.
- Link "run out".
- "not lbw" you didn't abbreviate this before i.e. (lbw) after the linked expanded version.
- "the Daily Telegraph," -> "The Daily Telegraph"
- Link "laws" to Laws of Cricket.
- "In the 2011 Twenty20 Cup, Hampshire.." hereafter all unreferenced.
- Spaced hyphens in the ref titles should be spaced en-dashes.
That's all I have, on hold. The Rambling Man (Staying alive since 2005!) 17:17, 2 April 2020 (UTC)
- @The Rambling Man: Cheers for the review as always. I have responded to each above. Feel free to be harsh, this is one that I hope to move onto FA at some point in the future. Harrias talk 07:41, 3 April 2020 (UTC)
- No worries. It easily passes GA criteria so I'm promoting. If you do take it to FAC, ping me and I'll make sure it gets at least one review!! Cheers. The Rambling Man (Staying alive since 2005!) 07:55, 3 April 2020 (UTC)